Thank you for feedback Frances.

My original draft actually had one more factor “Societal-Repression Factor” that I took out because it made it too long. But I agree that even this one is beyond ideal word count.

Hardest thing for me in writing is to chunk off and simplify concepts. Because in my brain everything is related and thus relevant to share.

But I recognize that ultimate goal for my essays is to help people. And if something is too long to consume than people won’t get the value.

So next post I write will be shorter. If you see it, please let me know your thoughts then.

Best!